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Peepal like patience

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English Poetry

Last year ,this time,

the peepal tree I see ,

from the window of mine,

was chopped by heartless someone with glee;

 

But now,she looks great and might,

Dark green leaves topped with light,

bushy ,tall ,and when sunlit bright,

my eyes delight.

Again like before she waits for wind,

to orchestrate and play;

the leaves on her branches set to  sway,

present   music like many thousand bells in a methodic chime,

Was it  her patience that really did pay?

8 Comments

  1. vartika says:

    a beautiful message very nicely woven as a poem…. nature indeed keeps on teaching many great virtues, all we need is to notice and borrow them.

  2. Gion Gion says:

    Kanchana,
    read this again. Nice poem. Liked it. Regeneration.
    Gion

  3. ULHAS says:

    A nice message….

    stars = 5

  4. kanchana says:

    Thanks very much Vartika,Ulhas and Gion

  5. Vishvnand says:

    Beautiful meaningful poem.
    Delighting content and the message.
    Liked very much.

  6. rajdeep says:

    i am amazed
    its marvelous ma’am

  7. Parespeare says:

    Was it her patience that really did pay?
    this line sums the poem beautifully
    well written

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