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Moon’s Ramp Walk
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English Poetry |
From layers of cloud screen
the moon half invisible, seen
quickly sail smooth.
Defying the truth.
Why was she there a three hour,
the noon, after?
A prelude to a performance later?
Or ,Was she shy of the stars?
Evading those critics,glares.
After my muse,
shes behind another screen;layered profuse,
Another little wait ,
probably the invisible ,with another outfit,
her clear white side ,makes a prouder gait.
To capture ,this natures art event ,I fail,
so full of grace, thy sail;
on this backdrop of deep blue canvas,
in to this semiconductor medium ,as verbose.
Good style of expression! I feel some more attention to grammar.could have been paid.
A beautiful poem, Kanchana.
Kanchana, I like this a lot but do have to agree with Sangeeta re the grammar.