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English Poetry

Two hour meeting went swiftly,

Agenda, only chatting;

Driving, cooking or parenting, tactfully,

Tips, for quick learning;

The simple meal, served   heartily;

Taste, enduring;

Can’t time tick slowly?

Thoughts on parting;

Day end, am charged absolutely,

Despite four hours of traveling.


©Kanchana selvakumar

10 Comments

  1. Gion Gion says:

    ” Can’t time tick slowly? ”
    Kanchana,
    loved this line.
    Gion

  2. Vishvnand says:

    Beautiful poem, enlightening,
    of how of a day, charming,
    simple but enticing,
    is enjoyed, though enduring.
    This is beautiful poem penning,
    Thanks indeed, for sharing.

  3. Shailesh Mohan Sahai says:

    Nicely expressed, Good one!, Kanchanaa ji.
    shailesh

  4. medhini says:

    Beautifully penned poem, Kanchana.

  5. Gion Gion says:

    Kanchana,
    re-read this piece. Lovely. Nice simple AB rhyming.
    Very Spartan language. For me the lines are like the inner musing of your mind, the ribs of a ship or better the timber frame of a house. We are familiar with the elements and can clad them with our own particular experiences.
    Fergus

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