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The firmament Of Love
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English Poetry |
The firmament of love needs to be illumined,
By only this –
The perseverant star-gleam of trust resolved,
The persistent moon-glow of hope renewed,
The permanent sun-glitter of promise retained.
Kusum
Intense muse on the subject
Elegantly & beautifully penned in choicest words
Liked immensely
commends
Lots conveyed in these lovely lines and the per..et and re..ed rhyme 🙂
what does firmament mean?
@s.n.singh,
Sir ,
Firmament means a thread as fine as the thread woven by a spider .
sarala
Very intense and meaningful, Kusumji.
Hi
Truly, the sun , moon and stars and their auras teach us the beauty of unconditional love.
sarala
Sir ,
I took firmament of love to mean the span of love but in reality Kusum meant the sky of love . I regret the mistake .
sarala,.
Ah Sarala, S.N. Singh and Me,
same sounding words can play tricks on us.
– Filament = thread, wire
– Firmament = the sky, the physical heavens.
Fergus
Kusum,
interesting indeed.
The contradictions and tensions of words and imagery are well done.
The opposition of passive and active and the right down the middle of the lines the equation of “love” with physical / metaphysical / poetic light.
Jam packed with allusion, style and thought, for me.
A good write,
Fergus
Small, intense and full of valuable content! Liked immensely.
Dear friends,
Most impressed with all your fine comments and feed back.
Kusum
Yes
i tried to get into the depth of it with the help of above mentioned comments
and its marvelous