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Titanic
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English Poetry |
(Titanic – Prompt – Movie name)
A maiden voyage filled with pride
The ship bedecked – like a beautiful bride
Society’s status symbol – The world’s very best
Could not fight destiny….pass natures test
An Eclectic mix of passengers on the trip
The much coveted unsinkable ship…
Class divides…vanity galore
To embark on their last journey gathered ashore…
Confident and graceful she plowed full speed
The warning messages she did not heed
As the world watched with amazing awe
The cruel ice berg ….too late the crew saw…
The captain tried to steer clear, of the frozen mass
Shining ahead like crystal glass
They tried to turn …it was too late
A massive rip in the ship’s hull – sealed its fate
The ill numbered life boats a few did save
The rest sank deep into their watery grave…..
From the clutches of death only a few returned
A horrific disaster – a lesson well learned!!
This “Titanic” won’t sink Seema ji… 🙂 Ya really portrayed very well on mind-canvas… 🙂
@P4PoetryP4Praveen, Praveen: If the Titanic wont sink what will the poetry be all about….LOL
It is sunk and gone.. lets just move on…
@seema ji, I was talking about your poetry “Titanic”… 🙂
nice trip ,
to de bottom of the sea 🙂
@viju, You seem to have enjoyed the trip …did u sink or survive??LOL
A fantabulous story poem. We should make children read it.
I loved the way you told the story. Thanks
@Pramod Khilery, Thanks … This one was just for the prompt….
Liked very much the crisp description and story-telling in the poem, maintaining a smooth flow as also the pertinent details.
An excellent write.
@VishVnand, Thank you…encouragement and appreciation at the same time..
BTW did you read my comment to P4Poetry at the “To India – On Republic day” poems site? Can I please request you to?
i am agree with Vishvnand sir
and really enjoyed every words if it
@rajdeep, Thanks ….
Nice story poem.
very well written.
@sonal, Thanks Sonal
Seema, this(as per me) is your better poems. The rhythm, the rhyme, the pace is very apt for the theme 🙂 the best part is it is a story told, no masala added 🙂
@Preeti Datar, Ha Ha Ha Adding masala would have made it a Bollywood story…must try that some time…Thanks.
“TITANIC” PHIR TERY KAHAANI YAAD AAI…
VERY NICELY NARRATED SEEMAJI…
GOOD ONE…
@dr.paliwal, Thank you …this was a quick one for the prompt…I had not yet written and the new prompt was up..so to avail of the opportunity…Titanic ka sahara liya…