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A Blanket Holiday

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English Poetry

 

Stick out my head from my bed,

its not morning, the sun’s delayed

or its dark, it’s the moon instead.

 

Under the blanket, drowned in a sheet

let me go back, slipped in it

a few more hours, a few more dreams, let me cheat.

 

Wearing days brought me no myself,

my time was paid, and tiredness had no help,

if not, be it, the bed at least be of self.

 

A few moments to live a little pleasant, a little lazy

my blanket and me, took away, a tour as cozy

holidays – my dreams, those destinations easy.


 

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24 Comments

  1. ULHAS says:

    Dear All,

    Please spend some time and comment.

    Thanks in Advance.

    Regards
    Ulhas Kavle

  2. Gion Gion says:

    Ulhas, read it on my phone so laynut a soblem. Read it 3/4 tines, rhyming very clever and language very subtle. The idea of lazing in bed is well expressed. How we ever dream? Not lazy at all! Enjoyed very much. Cant rate on my phone, will do later

  3. krishna says:

    Ulhasji!!!!
    A brilliant write and cleverly explains the essence of holiday so well.
    Will rate when I log in. Definitely 5 stars…

  4. Priyal says:

    a few more hours, a few more dreams, let me cheat.

    Liked these words…

  5. Vishvnand says:

    A lazy cozy morning of a holiday & its profound uniqueness beautifully captured & shared. Liked the poem immensely
    “if not, be it, the bed at least be of self.”…beautiful

  6. medhini says:

    Splendid, Ulhas;
    A nice & easy way to
    enjoy holidays.

  7. vartika says:

    gud one… 🙂

  8. shalu says:

    Hmmm you sure are having a lazy holiday under your balnket all so cozy and dreamy. 🙂

  9. shalu says:

    Hmmm you sure are having a lazy holdiay all so cozy and dreamy under your blanket:)

  10. dr.paliwal says:

    Very nice Ulhasji……
    Liked it…………
    5*

  11. rajdeep says:

    great nad gud write
    lovely

  12. ULHAS says:

    Dear Poets

    Thanks for reading this poem and commenting. I really appreciate you spending time on the poem.

    Thanks Gion…….:-)….But your user ID is interesting…..Explain your ID…..:)………………………….
    Thanks Priyal……..
    Thanks Krishna….the poem factory,
    Thanks VishVanand………
    Thanks Medhiniji,
    Thanks Vartikaji
    Thanks Shaluji………….Thanks Shaluji………twice……..
    Thanks Rajdeep

    Regards
    Ulhas Kavle

  13. Parespeare says:

    loved the closing lines to the poem
    the poem has a lot of finesse
    always enjoy reading your poems Ulhasji

  14. parminder says:

    What a dream…! After the hectic life that I lead, I swear, this is the answer to all prayers!! What bliss, lazing, lazing,, nothing else! 🙂
    Loved your interpretation of a holiday.

  15. ashwini kumar goswami says:

    Dear Ulhas, It seems to me as if you also dreamt of this poem and penned
    it when awakened. Very nicely narrated the real holiday leisureliness, though
    it may or may not be quite personal ! Please go ahead with such laconic
    juvenilias retrospecting your gap since 31st ultimo ! a.k. goswami.

  16. ashwini kumar goswami says:

    Ps: My latest poem “omnium gatherum” dated 5th instant is there for the
    perusal of all the dear witty critics/commentators, please !
    a.k. goswami.

  17. Sorry I’m late!
    HEy Ulhas. Refreshing stuff, this. Not changed, but your writing style has evolved A LOT. Clever clever rhyming. I’ll be honest, some of your earlier poems had some forced rhymes. Not even one here. Beautiful. And the way you portrayed it, I could actually feel the warmth of the sheet. Bliss.

    (+) – Exceptional writing style
    (-) – You deserve it. None in particular.

    • ULHAS says:

      @Shreyansh Sen Sharma,

      Sir, thanks…………that means…………….dil pe pathhar rakhke apne comments kiye thee………:) just kidding sir…………..

      Sometimes to make the flow……flow smooth, we have to force rhymings…even if they are not of your choice…

      Thank you again sir……

  18. ashwini kumar goswami says:

    PS: To make the title of my poem referred to as “omnium gatherum” Anglice,
    I have changed the title to be “HETEROGENEITY” hence forward, please
    note. a.k. goswami.

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