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May 11, 2009 (12:10 pm)

English Poetry

10 Comments

1. Parespeare says:

   11 May, 2009 at 12:17 pm

   short and concise, to the point
   speaks a lot and makes a gr8 impact with
   minimal use of words
   beautiful

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   • Parul says:

     21 May, 2009 at 11:18 am

     :).. thanks fr liking it..

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2. krishna says:

   11 May, 2009 at 7:09 pm

   Yes we are…
   As Benjamin Franklin said,”All men are created equal”.
   But the truth is they grow up and everything changes…
   Good work…

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   • Parul says:

     21 May, 2009 at 11:37 am

     thanks fr understanding it…

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3. dr.paliwal says:

   11 May, 2009 at 8:02 pm

   Good one…
   Short but effective…..

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   • Parul says:

     21 May, 2009 at 12:08 pm

     thanks..

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4. Vishvnand says:

   13 May, 2009 at 4:46 pm

   Liked the poem immensely.
   Beautifully said and very impacting.

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   • Parul says:

     21 May, 2009 at 11:38 am

     i feel blessed if my words do sound impactful..:)

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5. Preeti Datar says:

   14 May, 2009 at 11:15 am

   ‘need is just one’ – the basics yes, but the rich crave more….not necessarily need more. Parul, you certainly have brought our attention back to ‘oneness’, something we were forgetting.

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   • Parul says:

     21 May, 2009 at 12:07 pm

     n I just wish sincerely that we must understand it fully… to know the basic ingredient to be happy eternally..

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