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English Poetry |
Happy and sad incidences
striking and beautiful memories.
Unanswered Questions
life’s various stations.
Circumstances that are most desired
things that are always aspired.
whenever feeling sad and caged
just flips up the happy page.
something amazing catches eye
words from pen, simply fly.
Things that are dare not told
secrets all, my diary hold.
~~24/04/08~~
Nice one. Liked it very much.
But,
Earnest feelings and our thoughts,
In our diaries do we really write?
or we write what we should,
so that someone reads,
what we want him to read. ….!
@Vishvnand, Yes.. to be Honest I did…. but then thought somebody might read it n know me all… made me burn all my diaries…. 😀
thanks for liking it…
Good, well rhymed poem, nice idea.
I often had diaries as gifts and even tried to keep one once.
I found reading about myself and my life not to be that interesting and gradually gave up.
Maybe we are all diary keepers here? mabye…
@Gion Gion, Thanks for yr read n liking it…
yes keeping a diary indeed is a good idea… but then when we go back n read us we also find r mistakes n sweet memories all coming back to us…
A lovely poem with good flow.
@medhini, thankyou Medhini 🙂 ( nice lovely name you have )
Things that are dare not told
secrets all, my diary hold.
sums the whole poem beautifully
well written
@Parespeare, and thats true hai na…. there r so many feelings n incidences which we cannot share with anybody but yet they r so important in r lives… hence only a diary can hold them.. 🙂
good poem
@neeraj guru, Thanks 🙂
Nice one…………
@dr.paliwal, thanks for yr read doctor 🙂