Retired senior engineering, marketing & operations management Executive with Passion for & deeply interested in reading & listening to all varieties of poetry & songs and in particular those rendered in Hindi/Hindustani. Also interested in & loves reciting & rendering his own poems/compositions & songs on various subjects, composing tunes for songs and singing. Loves to & adept at playing Harmonium as accompaniment to singing & also as accompaniment to others performing.
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Writer’s block …? !!!
Peeping through candles of dried leaves,
On the grave of an unborn man,
Is moon from the earth,
Watched by the sky in the stars,
A singing owl is searching
For a dead nightingale’s song
and here I am, in a cozy room,
Writing to get over my writer’s block.
—- xxx —-
Is this VishVanandji…..I dont believe this……..This is a brilliant poem..
I guess this is your best one….I just liked the style and english…
Stars = all they are in the sky….
adding to my favs……….
SUPERB simply SUPERB 5 star plus
Too good, Sir, though I feel this is not your usual style. Sir, please correct me if I am wrong. I think the line “Watched by the sky in the stars” is erroneous. According to me, it should be “watched by the stars in the sky” or watched by the sky and the stars.” Or is it that you have tried to convey something through this arrangement of words which I have been unable to understand?
The Milestones of your poetric journey through which you have reached at the top presently. Its our good luck , we are meeting you on the way as local residents.
Very Nice!!!! Congrats !!!
@H.C.Lohumi
I am at a loss how to react.
Thank you so very much.
ise kahte hain kabeer das ki ulatbansi.
@siddha Nath Singh
Thanks very much.
mere liye ye bilkul ansuni nayii kahaavat hai aur poori nahiin kuch kuch hii samajh aa rahii hai 🙂
A lovely poem with an unusual
style, Vishvji. No idea, how I didn’t
look at it before?
@medhini
Thank you so very much for the comments and feelings in it. I always value your comments very much