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English Poetry |
Two hour meeting went swiftly,
Agenda, only chatting;
Driving, cooking or parenting, tactfully,
Tips, for quick learning;
The simple meal, served heartily;
Taste, enduring;
Can’t time tick slowly?
Thoughts on parting;
Day end, am charged absolutely,
Despite four hours of traveling.
” Can’t time tick slowly? ”
Kanchana,
loved this line.
Gion
@Gion Gion, thankyou Fergus sir
Beautiful poem, enlightening,
of how of a day, charming,
simple but enticing,
is enjoyed, though enduring.
This is beautiful poem penning,
Thanks indeed, for sharing.
@Vishvnand, thankyou Vijay sir for your poetic appreciation.
Nicely expressed, Good one!, Kanchanaa ji.
shailesh
@Shailesh Mohan Sahai, Thankyou Shailesh sir
Beautifully penned poem, Kanchana.
@medhini, thankyou ma’am
Kanchana,
re-read this piece. Lovely. Nice simple AB rhyming.
Very Spartan language. For me the lines are like the inner musing of your mind, the ribs of a ship or better the timber frame of a house. We are familiar with the elements and can clad them with our own particular experiences.
Fergus
@Gion Gion, thankyou very much.your sentences have intense meaning,sometimes am not able to comprehend them in your poems.