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Your Footprints ( Lyrics)

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English Poetry

Oh Baby, Where did you disappear
Your footprints etched everywhere

In every nook and cranny
Deep in my mind
Also on the heart
Getting entwined
Tried to wipe them
Got a thick broom
Millions of them in
Such a small room

Oh Baby, Where did you disappear
Your footprints etched everywhere

Then I thought of
Whitewashing the walls
Wipe away everything
And then not recall
Remove all traces so
Heart cannot seize
Every single drop
In a cold freeze

Oh Baby, Where did you disappear
Your footprints etched everywhere

The waters are muddy
I cannot even see
FIlled with weeds
Algae and debris
Have lost my senses
And all my sleep
Just surprise me
With a sudden peep

Oh Baby, Where did you disappear
Your footprints etched everywhere

6 Comments

  1. SK Iyer says:

    Dear Renu,

    A good one. The only nit, as I see it, is “Deep in my mind
    Also on the heart” . Heart and mind are the same, isn’t it?

    Also read some of your other works. Good work. Keep it up.

    Best wishes,
    SK

  2. Gion Gion says:

    Renu,
    liked this idea –
    “Millions of them in
    Such a small room”.
    Gion

  3. Preeti Datar says:

    Renu, a nice departure from your style! When can we hear the podcast? 🙂

  4. medhini says:

    A lovely song resembling a lullaby, Renu.

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