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English Poetry |
I came
I realized
I embraced
I believed
I mourned
I just want …to escape!
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English Poetry |
I came
I realized
I embraced
I believed
I mourned
I just want …to escape!
Escape thats Sanyas…..
@ULHAS,
Hi Ulhas,
It is the caricature of your life and also escape may not mean sanyas here. It might be like a good vacation from your daily busy work schedule or something that takes you away from the daily chores of life.
🙂
Thanks,
Rachana
oh i loved it!perhaps the last line could sweep us all. Rachna, if u can, y not have:
” i just wanted
to escape…” as the end
i m sorry to suggest for its exclusively your baby, but couldnt help-
just loved it…
@purabi,
Hi Purabi!
Thanks for your positive comment. Your comment appreciated!
🙂
oh just loved it
end of the poem is supurb !!
@pallawi,
Hey Pallawi!
Glad you liked my poem!
Very good and crisp poem, Rachana.
@U.M.Sahai,
Thanks Mr. Sahai for your comment!
Rachana,
great 5 stars.
Past “ed”, present “want”, future “to escape”.
Yes a break from the routine of life or mode of life or life itself. It works on all levels.
Amazing to express and convey such meanings in such a laconic style.
Gion
@Gion Gion,
Gion,
Thanks for bestowing the stars and encouragement!
Rachana:-)
Nice one.
I read
I mused,
I liked it
How about inserting a line
“I wrote”
between,
“I mourned” &
“I just want …to escape! ” 🙂
@Vishvnand,
Thank you Vishwa nand jee for sharing your beautiful lines!
where there is a “want” there is no escape.
@siddha Nath Singh,
thanks for comment!
beautiful
@rajdeep,
Thanks Rajdeep for liking my lines!
Beautiful! A reality, each of us seeks an escape now and then .
@parminder,
Thanks for appreciation Parminder!
I love this simple and plain 😉