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Through the Winds
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English Poetry |
Winds flow wings fluttered
flap they the eagle flight.
Crease slap the crops crumple
brush the green blade bold.
Leaves hung limp and dead
flowered spring fevered fade.
Clatter roofs shuttered kin
wrecks rumbled sways, carcass realms.
Sprees sprung the sun across
shut shine and silenced shimmer.
Rocking chair cheats, still swings swift
beaten gusts beats, joins the fleet.
New nests many, countless crushes,
flowing fierce threading tears.
Ulhas,
very different imagery than usually applied to the wind.
The title “Through the Winds” feels active and the generator of the verses.
“Sprees sprung the sun across
shut shine and silenced shimmer.”
“Clatter roofs shuttered kin
wrecks rumbled sways, carcass realms. – very imaginative.
I love the way you jump from image to image from verse to verse,
Gion
@Gion Gion,
5 stars for this strings of golden Shers.
A unique poem to be classified quite differently,
Had to take lot of pains to understand the pain in the poem,
narrated artfully,
Kudos to you for taking pains to write the poem in this manner, beautifully
a jigsaw of words,images and emotions
beautiful too.
alka
i loved it
Thanks all for putting your time and commenting……..
🙂
Beautiful! Needs time and repetition to seep through. The imagery is fantastic. Stars all!
@parminder,
Thanks ma’am…………..I have always voted for use of simple english in poetry, though was insulted by someone on one of my comments……This poem was just to show that anybody can put difficult english together and make it difficult for readers……………though complex poems are not bad…….its just that they are not open to the whole lot of readers……
This poem was written in that anger……….. 🙂
I hope you understand……………………….