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Verses In My Vein
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Verses in my vein,
live happy rhymed and content
drunk merry on champagne,
write out my intent.
Drain through my vein,
stream of verses those mine,
I wrote you out when,
in my own wishful design.
Colored when in blood,
the brave one revolts in campaign,
brave uttered in the word
with some verses of its pain.
Winks a verse, a blink of eye
the fluttering rhymes,
write a bee, write a butterfly,
the waving farms, of sailing breeze sometimes.
Wrapped tight to my skin,
peel off the mask
sonnets sing my past, sing of what has been
verses for the setting dusk.
Verses in my vein,
live happy rhymed and content
drink merry on champagne,
write out me intent.
To poet, to express, to write, to love, to read, and release power. Nice words and flow of poem.
@Ericka,
Thanks a lot………………appreciate the same…………..
A really marvelous mode of poesy, crafted and drafted in ecstasy.
Though I gather, you may be reluctant to upkeep rhythm and rhyme as
a prerequisite to poetry, you may yourself now appreciate how nice
the poetry represents with the decor of words befitting rhythm and
rhyme. Hence, please uphold them invariably for which you are, of course, witty enough, as I apprehend ! Stars*****!
@ashwini kumar goswami,
Sir, you are right…………rhyme or no rhyme…….its not a crime…….it should hyme…..if everything goes nice all at the sametime……..
Thanks
Ulhas,
very good. Liked this verse best –
” Wrapped tight to my skin,
peel off the mask
sonnets sing my past, sing of what has been
verses for the setting dusk.”
Gion
@Gion Gion,
You are right…………thats my fav lines too along with the first 4 ones…..thanks………………………..rest are all just fitting in the scheme………..you are right
Gion thanks for the comments…………..buddy…………….
Nicely rhymed poem, but I think, in the third line of first stanza it should be “drink merry on champagne” and in the last line of last stanza it should be ” write out my intent”.
@U.M.Sahai,
Sir, you are also right……….I had it as drink earlier…………but then just at posting the poem and when I read the poem 4-5 times, I felt it should be drunk, I dont know why, but drink was not playing in the flow…………
Thanks for the comment and you pointed things right………master mind….you guessed me right……ha…!!!
great imagery and flow of words..Ulhas!
@rachana,
Rachna thanks for the comments………..appreciate the same………….
” Verses in my vein,
live happy rhymed and content
drunk merry on champagne,
write out my intent.”
Very beautiful, enchanting unique poem and the subject too.
The poem opens the account with a classy six, remains freely flowing & delighting throughout till the very end like a glorious winning innings in a Twenty -20 Cricket match.
Kudos to you for this beauty. Stars 5 +
The only blemish appears to me is the last sentence you have added in the body of the poem. “This is not a contest poem…” I don’t know to signify what and why for ?
All poems on this site are wisely & happily contesting. Contesting with themselves to become better & better. 🙂
@Vishvnand,
Sir, I have removed the comments………….You really take pain as many at the site to put comments in detail…………………..thanks again for the motivating comments.
Thanks