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Who Wrote This Poem!!!
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English Poetry |
When I wrote a poem
the poem wrote me.
With strange thought I wrote the poem
the poem made me strange.
Strange thoughts weren’t mine,
which wrote the poem.
My thoughts never wrote a poem
No thoughts were mine.
Whose thoughts were they, who wrote,
the poem had no name.
Words had no name which wrote
my name never wrote a poem.
Then who wrote this poem………….!!!
Hmmm.. so the the poem is you
& you are the poem
very good concept
this is something new 🙂
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@viju,
Thanks a lot…………
Hmm.. i second what Viju’s said.. Interesting concept.. Has translated well into the verse.. Good write, Ulhas..
@Asma,
Thanks Asma, thanks for your time
Indeed very beautiful
confusing but meaningful.
& when you mull, very joyful
stars 4 +++
someone wrote the poem
I have only remained I
The poem passed from within me
That’s why I say poem is mine….
@Vishvnand,
Thanks sir………..really matters….
Ulhas,
brilliantly “difficult”.
Difficult to read if read too quickly.
There is a familiar feeling in these lines to be thought upon.
Do we ever write a poem?
Are we partners at a prompt or mere scribes to our own or some other muse?
Or as we read back through the lines we pen are we no longer that person?
Does the emergence of a poem change us in way?
Gion
@Gion Gion,
Thanks sir…………..thanks for the comments…………..and sorry that it was difficult to go through…………..
🙂
Really difficult and somewhat confusing to comprehend as to what the author wants to convey from this poem. How come the thoughts which come in my mind are not mine? Would you pl elaborate it a little bit?
@U.M.Sahai,
Thanks for the comments….
I believe that the thoughts that you have are adopted from the things you see or the poems you read or the talks you hear from people and you get influenced. The poem tries to tell you that when you are trying to write something you bring in all those thoughts and in the process you increase your views and many-a-times add in your own personality in that and churn out something totally different, which again changes your thoughts……
Its all about a thought which you get written upon………..
Sorry if I cant explain it further because I have tried to churn something myself here…………….
Thanks for the comments once again…
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good one, complex yet preserving simplicity