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Hope Revisited Another Day!!!
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English Poetry |
Rambling on the beach
watching the tides play
hide and seek..
birds chasing one another
desperate to reach
at the earliest…
far away,
a stray kite, waiting for
another whiff of wind…
whispering chaos
gruelling waves
slaps the rocks..
Sun is about to set
yet to show
another Day..! !
~13/07/10~
* In loving memory of my Dad who went in search of another day 34 yrs back.. 🙂
Nice creation. Loved it.
@Harish Lohumi, Thanks a lot HArish
beautiful poem, liked it.
@U.M.Sahai, thanks
Felt the poem Indeed as a very elegant depiction of nature
experienced sitting on a lonely lovely sea beach.
Commendable posting,
Kudos.
Liked immensely
@Vishvnand, Thanks a lot Vishvnandji .. yeah i know how does it feel to b at the beach …actually this was a dream which i saw myself.. i felt i ws that Wave.. That Bird.. That kite… n That Sun.
a beautiful poem indeed…
@Parespeare, Thanks 🙂
a very sweet poem..i loved the way u depicted nature..awesome !!
@karan balkar, M Glad that u liked it so much.
touching..kudos
@kanchana, 🙂