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Yearnings
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English Poetry |
Slipping away from my fingers inept,
Why is your speed,time, so break neck?
Stop, stay still for some time,
I still have loads to actualize.
Let me grasp the blooms fragrant
And enjoy their heavenly scent,
Let me play some more with children
Feel their smiles and thus enchant.
Let me plant some more flowers
And see them form lovely bowers,
Let me sing some songs Divine
That make my heart and soul shine,
Let me ride high on a swing
With laughter loud tinkling,
Let me be forever young
Let not age dampen my song.
And when my time has finally run out,
Let the exit not prolong,
In a jiffy let breath whoosh out
Like a last prayer from this mortal’s mouth!
very nice poem
time will never stay still but we can make the most of every second
@Parespeare, Time flies and so do desires, on imaginary horses:)
Thanks for the appreciation.
A nice touching poem,Soni.
@medhini, Thank you !
And when my time has finally run out,
Let the exit not prolong,
In a jiffy let breath whoosh out
Like a last prayer from this mortal’s mouth!
These lines are simply superb, Parminder ji. Everybody yearns for such an end of one’s life but very few get it.
@U.M.Sahai, Where is the harm in wishing? 🙂 Well, what will be will be….
Thanks for the appreciation!
another good one
loved it ma’am
@rajdeep, Thank you for your kind words.
Fantastic, meaningful & Lovely
Like a prayer extraordinary
Last stanza is indeed a superb ending
In all its meaning.
Kudos for this poem, a beauty
@Vishvnand, Thank you so much Vishva ji. After observing pain and sickness for such a long stretch , one prays for quick release only.
adorable lines Paraminderji!!!great one!!
@kanchana, May your earnings come true Paraminderji!!I
@kanchana, sorry i mean
‘yearnings’
A poem with deep sence and having essence of heart feelings-liked it very much- badhaaee