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3 liners(hindi)–2

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Hindi Poetry
टूटे सपने,
रिसती उम्मीदें,
भारी ज़िन्दगी..!
 
आकुल आरजुएं,
छटपटाते प्रयास,
थकी ज़िन्दगी..!
 
फैला आसमां,
सिकुड़े पंख,
रुकी ज़िन्दगी..!
 
बेमानी रिश्ते,
तर्कहीन समझौते,
फँसी ज़िन्दगी..!
 
बंधन खुले,
मंजिल चले,
हँसी ज़िन्दगी..!!!!
 
 
 
 
 

19 Comments

  1. kishan says:

    bahut acha prachiji

  2. U.M.Sahai says:

    अच्छे भाव, प्राची.

  3. rajdeep says:

    बेमानी रिश्ते,
    तर्कहीन समझौते,
    फँसी ज़िन्दगी..!
    a man convinced against his will is of the same opinion still

    loved it

  4. Vishvnand says:

    बहुत अच्छे, 3-liners
    मन भाये
    बधाई

    बंधन खुले
    कैसे खुले
    राज़ ही रहा ….

  5. Raj says:

    Liked it.

  6. rachana says:

    very nice prachi!

  7. sushil sarna says:

    good one-effective lines

  8. kalawati says:

    पूरी जिंदगी का खाका चंद लाइनों में वाह.

  9. poemnsamantha says:

    well,as if i am a south indian by birth its too difficult fr me to adjust with ur hindi,so sorry nd there is nothing as ur fault..all these comments prove tht u hd did something awesome nd i hav to appreciate it…nd thnx fr ur comments fr my poem “ASHES OF A LOVE STORY”,nd its something deep from my heart nd u’ll gt it if u have a good heart to chk ou “poemnsamantha” instead of samanthanpoem as i hd lost my passwrd..so take care nd keep writing….

    • prachi says:

      @poemnsamantha, m so sorry arundhati 4 soo so late reply,,i just read ur comment…and yes,,i do understand dau u cnt get my hindi poems veryy clearly but i really admire d way u hv written ur comments wid so many regards which m feeling right now in ur words over here…itz really nice 2 get such encouraging comments 4m a prolific poet like u..u also write veryy well and u deserve my appreciation..keep sharing dear..tak care 🙂

      • @prachi , i really bliv in detiny,so i think that the destiny had gave us an opportunity to share our feelings..u knw,i should be debted towards u and so am i, for encouraging my little talent..may god bless u…:-)

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