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It’s raining and raining in happiness
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Aug 2010 Contest, English Poetry |
It’s raining and raining in happiness,
The world seems at my feet,
With everything just blossoming around,
Seems there are no hesitations to keep.
It’s a time to spring up,
and let yourself loose,
and surely all of us can,
let loose our dancing shoes.
A ray of positivity is felt all around,
Something that sets me free,not bound,
And every prayer seems to be heard,
And every feeling gets its word.
Good Attempt..! But still it should be better written..!! Missing coordination all through..! Anyways…Waiting for the Next as Best..! Good luck,,:-)
reading this i feel a lot more positive. thank you 🙂
nice positive poem
cool……
reems1987,
I like it.
For me it does not read like the usual “be positive” stuff.
The lines seem to be bursting out of you, a genuine acknowledgement of good luck and or blessing that you have. A simple prayer or a thank you.
The feelings are contagious!
Gion