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Life and motion

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Aug 2010 Contest, English Poetry

Step by step,

or a flight of plane,

so hard to try,

many desrvs strain.

It is natural ,

every each had to face.

failures and barrier,

we meets many vein.

what matters,

do anything that you deserves only gain;

Dream high but with a strong base,

that no one can hurt you, even wind or rain;

I  too had may,

twists of life, even no nay light in the sky;

some claims earth,

some claims sky.

why the ‘Sphere’ always determine;

how vast is I?

Make  self  tough and harder,

face all, dig enemies into earth and also false minds,

I too wants this all hights and fame,

thus I never claims that m a poet;

because all poets has a heart of tears,

and always use to tell about the failures he get!

5 Comments

  1. kishan says:

    अच्छा प्रयास !!!!!!

  2. prachi sandeep singla says:

    i like it 🙂

  3. Gion Gion says:

    Amarpreet,
    I could not understand it as a whole. It needs work for clarity, I think.
    Gion

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