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Silent togetherness
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English Poetry |
Path glistens after the drizzles fresh
Pearls of raindrops on brim of leaves,
A little wind; pearls showers like stars.
Rare monsoon blooms shine bright.
A strange freshness fills the evening air.
Matching his small steps I walk him to the swing
We sit; enjoy the sway to and fro
He sits silent, a sweet smile and dreamy eyes
I too am quiet savoring the scenic marvel.
A rare “silent togetherness” me and my son.
These small moments of happiness; untold
Is all the wealth that we can amass,
Can keep it with us intact till the very end
So appreciate these and start the hoard 🙂
very nice and beautiful words, very nice combination of words…every words of it has indepth touch. i really can not express.
@Rahul, thank you Ramesh.
Uniquely beautiful & a very hearty poem
of lovely feelings.
Intense Happiness in life is nothing but the immense pleasure you derive from such simple Godly gifted moments & situations of lovely feelings, the silent togetherness, as you describe it.
Liked the poem immensely.
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@Vishvnand, Thank you very much for the comment.
I think this poem has published earlier also….
@dp, yes, it was published earlier but not in the poetry format. so i deleted the post. here i have tried to write the same matter as a poem.
@anupama, O….I….C….
@dp, superb………..
really nicely!!!!!!!!! use nice word to your poem!!!!fresh
Anupama,
“A little wind; pearls showers like stars.” – what an image!
I really enjoyed this, its gently narration and advice.
Let us be open to creating memories,
Gion