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Forever..!!
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English Poetry |
This time instead of a
Fretful Friday
they chose a
Tearful Tuesday
to crucify their Love..
Amidst the Last Supper Party
both sat cross legged
trying to hide a tear
talking aimlessly
wearing a fake smile..
Longing hearts embraced hating to part
unspoken words lingered
and melted in a longish kiss
promising only to meet
Forever… again….!!
~20/09/2010~
A nice meaningful poem,Parul.
@medhini, thanks..:)
Intreguing but quite interesting
makes reader disturbingly pondering for meaning
Well penned..
@Vishvnand, Yes indeed maybe because here the comparision is made between letting go of love and the crucification of ‘Jesus’
thanks for yr read.
@Parul
Thanks you so much for your reply.
Nice one, very well written,
@dr.paliwal, Thanks a lot
A good and sentimental poem, Parul. Liked immensely.
@U.M.Sahai, i feels honoured..thanks
liked it
@rajdeep, 🙂
Parul,
very striking, loved it. Deceptively simple language for such a heart wrenching experience of having to part,
Gion