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Threading through it.

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English Poetry, Sep 2010 Contest, Uncategorized

Eyes blinking
like the red light on a booting computer.
In an ear whirring
like a spinning hard-drive.
A screen opening
from between parting curtains,
Showing
more than a perfect Windows© background.
A tapestry of colour and light
woven in the rain-washed air.
Threading through it a silence…..

6 Comments

  1. Vishvnand says:

    Beautiful idea and the take
    Elegant interpretations it does make
    Commends

  2. renu rakheja says:

    Loved the last 3 lines- seeing you after a long time or maybe I missed seeing

  3. medhini says:

    A magnificent poem,Gion.

  4. rajdeep says:

    really
    nice poem

  5. parminder says:

    A very different take on rain! Interesting! Liked the metaphors.

  6. yep..itz a sort f dfrnt luk nd s really appreciative,i guess…

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