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Threading through it.
English Poetry, Sep 2010 Contest, Uncategorized |
Eyes blinking
like the red light on a booting computer.
In an ear whirring
like a spinning hard-drive.
A screen opening
from between parting curtains,
Showing
more than a perfect Windows© background.
A tapestry of colour and light
woven in the rain-washed air.
Threading through it a silence…..
Beautiful idea and the take
Elegant interpretations it does make
Commends
Loved the last 3 lines- seeing you after a long time or maybe I missed seeing
A magnificent poem,Gion.
really
nice poem
A very different take on rain! Interesting! Liked the metaphors.
yep..itz a sort f dfrnt luk nd s really appreciative,i guess…