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Beauty of Warmth
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English Poetry |
The time period of cache
Counts more than a decade;
From depth, indeterminate,
With digitized precision and no edit;
The embedded syllables resonate
and cut through, but quiet.
With accelerated retrieval speed
The images, once again, fascinate;
How did the Archive‘s links remain inherent?
And just need a virtual trigger, to reconnect?
Is it the immortal Warmth?
Great, Kanchana,
loved the techno imagery.
I tried something similar in “Threading through it.”
I like the way you use the idea of data retrieval to symbolize connecting with memory and divinity.
Just a couple of points; – “and cuts through,” – here the form of the verb (to cut) should be (cut) to agree grammatically with “syllables.
“precision and” – “but quiet.” – “remain inherent?” – reduce spaces between the words.
@Gion Gion, thanx v much ,I ve done the corrections, as suggested.
you blowed me off to the Electronics triggering concept..nice technopoem…good one the last line cleared 4 wat and where the poem going..
nice keep it up…
@Abhi Tamrakar, Thankyou very much for your comment and thoughts on reading the poem
Very techno savvy poem
I felt as if this Gift from Divinity here named as Immortal Warmth is defined in highly technical terms.
Commends for this beautiful poem of an original lovely style
Yes the whole phenomenon is like a supernatural miracle & a great precious gracious gift from Almighty but often without even a spec of gratitude we take it for granted and don’t even ponder.
@Vishvnand, Thankyou very much Vijay sir for the compliment on the style.I feel greatly honoured.
Lovely, techy poem. Loved the words symbolising thw techy workings and Divinity! Beautiful!
@parminder, thank you v much Parminder Ma’am
loved it
ma’am
Thank you v much Rajdeep