Just A Simple guy....born on 29th march 1985.... apne bare me or kuchh nahi kehena ...bas simple raho simple jiyoo~
In short I'm:
An Electronics Engineer by Qualification
A system Admin by Profession
A Poet by Passion 'And'
A Painter by Heart ...
Abhi Tamrakar has written 7 poems. Visit Poet Page: Abhi Tamrakar
@Vishvnand, Sir, I do agree with your Reply , I made it like this to give up a new way to poetry; a poetry coupled with Design..
thanks for your nice comment.
Abhi this is really nice Poem, and presenting it this way is very Creative too, but I feel It would have been more Innovative if yourself have sprinkled some colours on a Paper and then pasted these Lines
@nitin_shukla14, yeah i first thought to make it like that only, but then i decided to try out something very new and different..to present the poetry of my own..
thanks for your nice comment..
Hi Abhi,
very nice poem and idea for the design but the picture exceeds the display area of the post.
As to the writing why use txt spk “wid” when you use “with” in verses before and after? Correct spelling looks and reads better.
Gion
@Gion Gion, yup i realise a bit later about that..tried using half size but it was too small and to convey this idea i have to keep as it is…well i’ll see this could not be done next time..
the use of “wid ” in place of “with” is my mistake ..and will not be repeated..
thanks sir for appreciation and correction advise…
I liked the poem
But personally I feel this is too loud a presentation for the fine sentiments being conveyed in the poem.
@Vishvnand, Sir, I do agree with your Reply , I made it like this to give up a new way to poetry; a poetry coupled with Design..
thanks for your nice comment.
Abhi this is really nice Poem, and presenting it this way is very Creative too, but I feel It would have been more Innovative if yourself have sprinkled some colours on a Paper and then pasted these Lines
@nitin_shukla14, yeah i first thought to make it like that only, but then i decided to try out something very new and different..to present the poetry of my own..
thanks for your nice comment..
Very nice and cute..
@Dhirendra Misra, very thanks sir to appreciate me..
Hi Abhi,
very nice poem and idea for the design but the picture exceeds the display area of the post.
As to the writing why use txt spk “wid” when you use “with” in verses before and after? Correct spelling looks and reads better.
Gion
@Gion Gion, yup i realise a bit later about that..tried using half size but it was too small and to convey this idea i have to keep as it is…well i’ll see this could not be done next time..
the use of “wid ” in place of “with” is my mistake ..and will not be repeated..
thanks sir for appreciation and correction advise…