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A sudden dust genie along the road skipping.
Wild white horses from lake to sandy shore leaping.
Spring cloud shadow over a mountain ridge climbing.
The leaves rustle in the poplars the way lining.
Rain drops from a sun-shower slowly falling.
Bright summer sun-light on the lake surface sparkling.
The one fluffy white cloud across the sky floating.
The faintest breeze through the barley crop rippling.
Ephemeral wisps of mist warm earth releasing.
Morning fog around the sleeping hillocks rolling.
Transient, in the grand scheme of things fleeting
But in each moment, present perfect remaining.
©Copyright Fergus Carty 2011
A gr8 poem as always , Sir
amazingly detailed depiction with a certain depth in the poem as a whole!!
really liked the last 2 lines
“Transient, in the grand scheme of things fleeting
But in each moment, present perfect remaining.”- really beautiful choice of words!
A poem outstatnding
Enticingly beautiful elucidating
the present’s perfect remaining
be always so enlightening
and divinely entertaining
Kudos for the penning
You love nature ? The entire poem is about things people hardly notice as they take these things for granted….i could visualize the entire poem as i read it…very well written…
@renukakkar just adding , i rated it 5 *
@renukakkar,
sorry, i keep coming back to your poem again and again…please can you mail it to me ?
Ammmmmazing !
The word “Transient” seems to be the nub…..beautiful….
Thank you Visvnand, Renu, Hitesh, dp & Raj,
for the kind comments and rating and I hope all readers enjoyed reading this poem as much I did writing it,
Fergus