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Nature Heals
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Crowned Poem, English Poetry |
The cold water,
washes away my tears,
if i am lonely,
i speak, and the trees hear……
if i am silent,
birds teach me to talk again,
and the winds,
blow away my pain……
the golden sun,
tells me its a new day,
the soft breeze,
frisks my fears away…..
the smell of wet soil,
gives me a feeling of delight,
the shades of trees,
shelter me from the scorching sunlight…..
the sun rays, gold,
wake me up every morning,
and the sea-stones,so cold,
comfort me after a day’s scorning….
there is silence,
all around me,
i can’t hear anything,
but, there is a lot to see…
i look at the mountains, high,
when i am low,
i turn to mother nature,
when i don’t know where to go….
the seeds teach me,
how to grow and fight,
the changing seasons teach me,
that changes are alright.
nature is all around us,
teaches us a million things, still we don’t care…
one day, when none of it will exist,
there will be no one to heal us, we will just stand and stare……..
Good one ..
@dp, thank u 🙂
Maitreyee,
very impressive, style, structure. The choice of rhyming scheme give a flexibility for expression of the theme. Nice personalized but realistic imagery and a sound expression of ideas.
Gion
“there is silence,
all around me,
i can’t hear anything,
but, there is a lot to see…” –
@Gion Gion, thanks a lot for the encouragement…thnk u!
Beautiful indeed and commends
totally second Gion Gion comment.
keep it up
@Vishvnand, thank u 🙂
Excellent poem,Maithraeyee.
Very beautiful and mature! The words and the imagery are so realistic. Keep it up!