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THE FLUTE-NOTES
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English Poetry |
LOVE,
You came softly on tip-toe,
just to go ,to walk away
on a summer day,
like a rain cloud
in a shroud.
Nay, you came without a scheme
like a mid-summer night’s dream.
With artistry,gained mastery
over a tender heart ,in mystic mystery !
You flew away on winged winds,
tracing indelible footprints,
leaving neither footnotes,
nor flute notes;
In such eloquent silence ,
shattering my quiet innocence .
Beautiful like a breath of fresh air.
Kusunm
@kusum,
Thanks , kusum , this one came spontaneously,inspired by Sumit’s mail .
Sarala,
beautiful.
Lovely image – “like a rain cloud
in a shroud.”
(footprints, footnotes, flute notes) a well thought string of words,
Gion
@Gion Gion,
Gion ,
Merci bien, you missed the oxymoron … eloquent silence…
sarala.
@SARALA,
ah, I did not miss the oxymoron. It was that you were deafened by my lack of comment on it!! 🙂
Oxymoron = a fool on pure oxygen 😉
Gion
@Gion Gion,
Gion, Gion,
Well, Well, Well, what do I say when hit on the head ?
They call me a fool ,part of it is true, the rest of it is untrue .
ha! ha!
sarala
Very beautiful extraordinary poem on love
in a very lovely poetic musical manner
sings of what is has done.
Indeed very delighting…
Kudos
@Vishvnand,
Sir,
I am deeply delighted by your sensitive and delicate comment . Thank you.
sarala.