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Uncertainly Love
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English Poetry, May 2011 Contest |
This Poem is submitted for the May Poetry Contest
Hours at the coffee shop
and years of we.
Though we have been known
but we seldom agree.
A taken togetherness
and gushes of joy.
the laughter stays moments
not always, so why?
Toughened adorations
Have they weathered now?
For its been years
should we call it love?
What’s powered over?
over time and over us,
we or our love,
is it not yet, the time to assess!
Call it not love, yet
with such moments of repulsion,
vigor of hatred strong.
would it outrun?
Of love and in love,
the uncertainty, uncertain.
Love or hatred or both
though we wished, for just one.
A lovely piece,Ulhas.
Glad to meet you here after
a long time.Keep coming.
Ulhas,
welcome back stranger :}
This is one of your best. Good style, subtle rhyming, flow and simplicity of conversational language. Accessible imagery. A deep consideration of emotions.
” Of love and in love,
the uncertainty, uncertain.” – well put.
Fergus
hey really nice one dude… Liked it 🙂