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English Poetry

Fatefully, the fawn fell,

caught by the hunter’s shot.

Now the victor  has a tale to tell.


Love dwells not in such hunting haunts

or in teasing  and  tethering taunts.

Neither does it live in war-zones

nor does it breed in greed.

It does abundantly flower in subtle deeds.

 

But the hunter, he loves his hunt

and the fawn too, adores its teasing sprint.

Like the dilemma of the race-horse punter

goes the story of infamy and glory

of the fawn and the hunter.


This  call to offload gun metal with responsibility

is indeed a rare and flawed ability .

Isn’t it gentler by far to handle with care

the hound and the hare , as they pound and glare

unaware of the traps and snares ?


In this steeple chase ,

the alchemy of the race  leaves a trace

where Love and Art blend and transcend .

While the hunter loves his hunt , the fawn is born to fend ……

7 Comments

  1. Gion Gion says:

    “In this steeple chase ,
    the alchemy of the race leaves a trace
    where Love and Art blend and transcend .
    While the hunter loves his hunt , the fawn is born to fend ……”

  2. Gion Gion says:

    Sarala,
    it is actually possible to turn lead to gold…but the effort and cost are so high and the result so small…that it is only an academic exercise,
    Gion

  3. Vishvnand says:

    Liked the poem very much.
    God made animals to kill another animal only in self defense or when hungry for food, which animals always abide by. Human beings are the only animals who seem to be ceremoniously breaking this law in many ways. We are the animals of the worst kind.

    • kusumgokarn says:

      @Vishvnand,
      Amazed at Sarala’s extempore poetic rejoinder to my poem!
      True, God created the hunter and the fawn. But it is human folly of perverted thoughts that ends in the destruction of the beauty in nature.
      Vishvnandji’s & Gion’s comments are remarkable too.
      Thanks a lot.
      Kusum

  4. ashwini kumar goswami says:

    Nice expression via naturally phenomenal philosophy !
    4-stars at least !

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