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Betrayal – Terrible Error…
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English Poetry, Jul 2011 Contest |
Look Here, Look There, Look Everywhere,
Lust, Greed, Jealousy in the Air,
Love or Friendship, no longer fair, nor does it care,
A happy ever after is bluntly rare.
It’s only I and Me that matter,
And bite the hands that clatter,
Money makes you more and more fatter,
Loosing values goes on climbing ladder.
To decieve the one that make you,
To delude the one that take you,
Shows no signs of humanity in you,
Alas! Suicides and Divorces arn’t any new.
Blow the Whistle and the deal is done,
Broken glasses can never be undone,
Pieces scatter as you run,
Late realisations help no nun.
To Bequel’s a mistake you committ,
Playing Judos to the summit,
Treachery is all to your credit,
Await till the heavens punish you to its zenith.
Leave this path of error,
Else it will leave you no terror,
Listen! Come back and be fairer,
And make your conscience more clearer!
Tasneem,
Topic is well covered.
Some grammatical errors need correction
more fatter
more clearer.
‘more’is not required.
Kusum
@kusumgokarn, Thnx for your feedback.. its appreciated.. 🙂
Tasneem,
the post needs a bit of a rework.
Nice ideas in it. Liked these lines,
Fergus
“To decieve the one that make you,
To delude the one that take you,
Shows no signs of humanity in you,”