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English Poetry, Jul 2011 Contest |
I have no place to hide my sin , for failure is my synonym,
I dunno why i am so mean , my life has no rhythm in realm,
I am so lonely in this crowd , the web is trapping me,
I can’t make any sound , for they are my enemy,
My thoughts are sour , i am so alone ,
all i think is vengeance,
I tried to convince all of them , but they denied me acceptance,
my heart was broken on the very dawn, when i suffered treachery,
i was fired from my own clan , and accused of robbery,
my faith was brutally killed ,by a girl highly skilled,
she trapped me in her charm and i couldn’t sense the harm,
looking at my failures back,its hard to achieve comeback,
but i will try my level best to come up with a powerful jest.
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yes , m no more the guy , who was seeking vengeance,
for forgiveness is a crime , i don’t give it a dime,
for now i sing this song , it has been enough long,
&my life has regained its rhythm , for success is my synonym
yaaaa……………………………
shubham gupta
Rhythm lost, rhythm gained, from a synonym with failure to a synonym with success. Nice comeback.
@Apurva Bharat Gaglani
@apurva : thanx …actually i wanted to show the importance of forgiveness and its impact on our attitude..thanks for commenting…,
@Shubham Gupta,
Shubham,
a thoughtful piece.
The last 2 lines of the last section – are you working towards forgiveness in you attitude?,
Gion
Very nice poem with an optimistic
view,Shubham.