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I just want to say…

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English Poetry

When I look into your eyes
it speaks to me,
when I press your lips with that of mine
it whispers to me,
when I put my fingers in your ears
everything in you dawns to me,
when you hug me
the soul underneath me gets stirred up.
I can feel the pleasant breeze
in your every breath.
When I hold your hands
it makes strange resolutions to me.
My heart longs for you darling……
It is said when these are your feelings
you are in love.
The word puzzle in itself,
however my friend,
I want to confess…
never leave me alone
because I feel my life has got your addiction…

14 Comments

  1. Hardly Matters says:

    I love that word ‘addiction’,
    covers all matters of sin and hanker!!
    But in the end u used it in decisive manner, which i like d most !!!
    Over all well try !!!!

  2. ULHAS says:

    what a great writing. I simply enjoyed it………Free style writing.

    Superb…………10/10

  3. medhini says:

    Very nice poem,Sonal.

  4. aniruddha234 says:

    Judging by your previous poem “LAST CRY”, I think you should have made this one more better. Nevertheless, feelings are feelings and such poems are like a free form of writing. Those expressions just pour out from the heart onto paper. Never mind, such lines are even the subjects of my compositions. Hoping to see a much better one next time. But overall, this was a good read.

  5. gipslay says:

    Its more like a love song…I like it…Keep writing dear…!

  6. Gion Gion says:

    Sonal,
    very spontaneous feel to it. Yet so often we cannot speak these words, we can only write them.
    “It is said when these are your feelings
    you are in love.
    The word puzzle in itself,” – good.

  7. Daljeet Singh says:

    Really LOVE is like addiction….

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