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snores of my sleep…
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English Poetry |
sometimes I lose track of time
sitting endlessly all by myself
creating weird sound as i whine,
sometimes I gaze at the pendulum
yet again endlessly figuring out
the reason of the encircling gloom,
then sometimes i run, all perspiring,
gasping for every breath
and here I am swimming
against the outrageous waves..
as my eyes whirl underneath my lashes,
insomnia and disturbia
keeps me awake in my dreams
and There my conscience seems to get unconscious..
Facile delighting amusing pondering
Liked the style & poem much & more
Though was taken aback by the title’s snore 🙂
Hearty commends
@Vishvnand, snore says thank you so much…:)
Sonal,
draws the reader into the experience of uncertainty, the shadowy, distorted places between wakefulness and sleep, thought and dreams.
Fergus
“sometimes I gaze at the pendulum
yet again endlessly figuring out
the reason of the encircling gloom,”
@Gion Gion, its about dream where I virtually stay awake..and thank you for appreciating..:)
and There my conscience seems to get unconscious..
I agree with Fergus
I liked your muse very much
@Rajdeep, thank you so much..
there was a time, when I loved sleeping
now it is really hard falling asleep at times
@Parespeare, seems u need to go back to childhood and remember some sweet lullaby to have a tight sleep…:)
sorry i never meant that…and had no other means to apologize.
“sometimes I gaze at the pendulum” so u must b good at judging people.
People generally confuse “time” with “unit of time”, so don’t be judgmental in life. Anyways sorry…!!
@Rajan Mishra, so u found me out…newayz ur apology accepted and i was not being judgemental at all…n thanx for comment..:)
I read all your poems, all of them are very nicely written…few of them i dint understood. And in most of them you reveal a compete different picture of yours, it varies in every poem…“Poetry deceive….for some of them enlighten”.
Thank God its easy to Google you or i would had came Shilong to say “sorry”.
Bye.
Great writing indeed…..only a nobilian can do it……keep it up sonal………
@Karunesh Kaushal, thanx karunesh..hail nobilians..\m/