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snores of my sleep…

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English Poetry

sometimes I lose track of time
sitting endlessly all by myself
creating weird sound as i whine,
sometimes I gaze at the pendulum
yet again endlessly figuring out
the reason of the encircling gloom,
then sometimes i run, all perspiring,
gasping for every breath
and here I am swimming
against the outrageous waves..
as my eyes whirl underneath my lashes,
insomnia and disturbia
keeps me awake in my dreams
and There my conscience seems to get unconscious..

13 Comments

  1. Vishvnand says:

    Facile delighting amusing pondering
    Liked the style & poem much & more
    Though was taken aback by the title’s snore 🙂

    Hearty commends

  2. Gion Gion says:

    Sonal,
    draws the reader into the experience of uncertainty, the shadowy, distorted places between wakefulness and sleep, thought and dreams.
    Fergus
    “sometimes I gaze at the pendulum
    yet again endlessly figuring out
    the reason of the encircling gloom,”

  3. Rajdeep says:

    and There my conscience seems to get unconscious..

    I agree with Fergus
    I liked your muse very much

  4. Parespeare says:

    there was a time, when I loved sleeping
    now it is really hard falling asleep at times

  5. Rajan Mishra says:

    sorry i never meant that…and had no other means to apologize.
    “sometimes I gaze at the pendulum” so u must b good at judging people.
    People generally confuse “time” with “unit of time”, so don’t be judgmental in life. Anyways sorry…!!

  6. Rajan Mishra says:

    I read all your poems, all of them are very nicely written…few of them i dint understood. And in most of them you reveal a compete different picture of yours, it varies in every poem…“Poetry deceive….for some of them enlighten”.
    Thank God its easy to Google you or i would had came Shilong to say “sorry”.
    Bye.

  7. Karunesh Kaushal says:

    Great writing indeed…..only a nobilian can do it……keep it up sonal………

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