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Dichotomy of a Beach
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English Poetry |
The open sea
The closed harbor
The rising waves and
The falling sand
The moist wind
The dry shores
The swaying tree and
The sturdy rock
The thatched roof
The smooth floor
The smell of hot food and
The stench of cold fish
The crowded stretch
The empty sea
The lonely road and
Then just you and me
Beautiful poem of muse
Dichotomy in everything in life is there to sustain & bemuse
Here couldn’t fathom whether dichotomy you appreciate or accuse…. 🙂
@Vishvnand, Always appreciate sir 🙂 Life is too short to accuse.
@sneha_arora
Yes. Very true. Accusing is misusing life and missing the bus.
But I felt somewhere in the poem this feeling should clearly reflect 🙂
@Vishvnand, Very true, completely agree 🙂
Sneha,
Very enjoyable poem, up-lifting and heart warming.
Light and romantic – the complementary, interdependent, the “you and me”.
I feel verse 3 is slightly out of character with the other verses and could be omitted to the betterment of the poem,
Gion
@Gion Gion, Thanks Gion 🙂 And yes I agree, verse three does take away from the rest of the poem..will edit it it in future publishings