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Metamorphosis
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English Poetry |
I found him in the stark loneliness,
Shying away into the complete darkness..
A long lost friend he was, to my surprise;
At the first glance, I didn’t recognize..
A friend, old enough to be forgotten;
Confused him with a school friend, someone
Too shrivelled to stand on his own,
With baggy eyes and clothes all torn.
With a wry smile, he asked, if I remember..
I shrugged and began to ponder.
Was taken aback by the thought that fluttered,
“You are me!!” I involuntarily uttered.
What was going on, I tried to figure..
“How could I be you and me together?”
Replied, “You are an amorphous, and I am the pure”
“You were me ,but, for good, aren’t me anymore..”
-Vijesh Bhute
Very beautiful poem
Liked immensely
So very true, Yes; but that me
wants expression, often anonymous
In spite of all this metamorphosis
@Vishvnand, Thank you very much sir for appreciating the thought 🙂
Nice effort.. very true to our current state 🙂
@Richa Srivastava, hehe pre exam poem 😛 thanks for appreciating 🙂
awwwwwwww……….. its beautiful…. 🙂
gud goin dude.. 😀
@aarushi, Thank you 🙂
this is amazing… i have no words! super!!!
@Taruna, Thank you so much 🙂
आपके तरन्नुम की तकल्लुफ से निकली तबस्सुम की हम दाद देते हैं …
@Pukhi, dhanyavaad padhne k liye aur main aapki taarif ka shukraguzaar hu 🙂
As usual superb poem….ur thoughts r really mindblowing:)especially the day before exam;)
@swathi salin,
Unusual style of self- reflection. Well handled with a surprise twist at the end.
‘too shrivel’ needs correction as ‘too shrivelled’.
‘began a thorough ponder’
could be correctly written as ‘ began to ponder’.
Hope you don’t mind.
Kusum
@kusumgokarn, Thank you so much for the corrections.. i have to improve on the grammar part. I have updated the changes you suggested. Thank you 🙂
u are making my secret stories into public. but i thank you. you make it easier to remember when we grow up 🙂
@Joy B, I am glad you liked it 🙂 and sorry for letting the secret slip out 😛 thanks once again
Beautiful……
@dr.paliwal, Thank you sir for the appreciation. 🙂
Maza aa gaya…kya suspense tha!!
@Bhupesh, hehe Thanx bro 🙂
very well articulated Vijesh….and the imp part is I cud relate to this one…
good going!
God bless you
@Ruth, thank you 🙂