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Dreams..

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Dec 2011 Contest, English Poetry

I see myself wandering
in the world created of my whims…
My subconscious projections,
appear blur to my vision,
we talk, we run..
There, I limp and suddenly return…
However, the sedation,
leads to a virtual formation,
of memories in time
to gradually sublime
into a fictitious tale
from my apprehensive dale.
A minute on my watch
fetches me ample of time to march,
through the bizarre ensemble
that I had artfully scribbled
with the pen of thoughts
and what had circumstances bought…
All these chance in a dream,
a supernatural phenomenon discerning within…

11 Comments

  1. Vishvnand says:

    Nice one; liked it.very much

    As it is dreams to me have been intriguing
    Your poem on top of it is not only amusing
    but a pondering delightfully confusing… 🙂

  2. ashwini kumar goswami says:

    The poem envisages reality of poet’s individual dreamy
    feelings with nicety ! In the ending line, ‘phenomena’ needs to be rectified by its singular form ‘phenomenon’ to suit the
    article ‘a’ ! Further, the word ‘preternatural’ would be
    more apposite than ‘supernatural’ in this topic !
    Thanks for delightful elaboration of dreams !

  3. medhini says:

    A lovely piece,Sonal G.
    Best wishes.

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