Dreams..
I see myself wandering
in the world created of my whims…
My subconscious projections,
appear blur to my vision,
we talk, we run..
There, I limp and suddenly return…
However, the sedation,
leads to a virtual formation,
of memories in time
to gradually sublime
into a fictitious tale
from my apprehensive dale.
A minute on my watch
fetches me ample of time to march,
through the bizarre ensemble
that I had artfully scribbled
with the pen of thoughts
and what had circumstances bought…
All these chance in a dream,
a supernatural phenomenon discerning within…
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Nice one; liked it.very much
As it is dreams to me have been intriguing
Your poem on top of it is not only amusing
but a pondering delightfully confusing… 🙂
@Vishvnand, thank you so much for appreciating….:) 🙂 🙂
Very nice.
@sonal, thankyou ….:) 🙂
The poem envisages reality of poet’s individual dreamy
feelings with nicety ! In the ending line, ‘phenomena’ needs to be rectified by its singular form ‘phenomenon’ to suit the
article ‘a’ ! Further, the word ‘preternatural’ would be
more apposite than ‘supernatural’ in this topic !
Thanks for delightful elaboration of dreams !
@ashwini kumar goswami, thank you o much for the delighting comment..and thank you for all the corrections suggested..:)
A lovely piece,Sonal G.
Best wishes.
@medhini, thankyou so much..:) 🙂
@sonal,
Complicated word structure like some of our dreams.
A fine take off from natural to supernatural level.
Kusum
@kusumgokarn, thankyou so much …:) 🙂
🙂