The Time Traveller..
Yes I am travelling..
travelling through roads
roads that end unto horizon
horizon so far from my reach…
reaching is me to an island
island of thoughts,
thoughts amidst the ocean of dreams,
dreams that I perceive,
perception not enough to fulfill…
fulfillment is racing behind a veil,
a veil that blinds the vision,
the vision that nurtures within,
“within” seems to surrender,
surrender unto despair,
despair was the consequence of self defeat…
the defeat that I never faced,
yet the face mocks,
mocks my reflection,
as I gaze into the mirror of destiny,
the destiny that my palm read,
the more I read, the more I dread..
the dread of falling,
falling into a pit,
a pit of doom,
the doom gleamed,
gleamed by the presence of Me,
me asleep there,
there Me arise,
arise to complete,
complete the cycle,
the cycle that I began,
travelling through the time…
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A fine study into one’s subconscious self.
Some lines need a bit of alteration for grammatical correction.
‘reaching is me..’-‘is’ can be cancelled.
‘thoughts a midst’- to be joined as ‘amidst’ .
‘as I gaze to…’ to be ‘into’.
Kusum
@kusumgokarn, All is okay,
save the last sddition of ‘into’ after gaze ! A nice and infty poem
worth praising without demur ! Outdstanding ! Congrats on your
classic endeavour !
@ashwini kumar goswami, thankyou for your suggestions and wonderful comments…:)
@kusumgokarn, thankyou for the suggestions and I have done the needful…:)
A thoughtful elegant merry go round
Liked the poem, well penned & profound
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@Vishvnand, thankyou so much 🙂 🙂