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Dec 2011 Contest |
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Come relax, have a seat
You’re no guest, let’s play it,
give me rest, play my mood
stories of me, bright and good.
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It’s about me, not to insist,
center stage, in midst.
I play the hero, crowned,
Music as I wish, it should sound.
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Love, as I feel, love me deep
hugged to the cushion, eyes asleep,
caress me, hands through my hair
take my pain, as your share.
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Cheerfulness, make it an habit,
pledge to my yearn, oh! do commit.
Though for now, I need neither fame nor Money
nothing that could be made plenty.
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Darken not the dark night – (exclude)
Scare me not, no Strife, no feud
Come rest, and as me, play a guest
Obliged, expressed, and professed.
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A beautiful, well worded, well rhymed and a
meaningful one, yet, a different piece, Ulhas.
Best wishes for 2012.
Ulhas,
Neat composition.
Some alterations would make it better, if you agree.
an habit’ – ‘a habit’.
‘Strife’ – strife’.
‘as me’ -‘ like me.
Kusum
good poem Ulhas JI