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Amidst the woods

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English Poetry, Feb 2012 Contest

Beautiful flowers
and natural showers
surrounded the castle
of my longing heart.
Oh! my prince charming,
I float over my cravings
for the smile of your face
and to dissolve in your solemn embrace.
Oh! My chivalrous hero,
racing the horses on the road so precarious,
that unbeatable pride,
where secretly your victory hides,
I moan the grievances of my heart…
that separation has admiringly bought …
My patience sighs,
on your promises high…
Anticipation forges inside,
whenever drizzle shapes a castle of clouds,
for your arrival…
and then there you are…
like a beautiful dream..
clutching my hands with that of yours
and then amidst the woods….
I gradually diffuse within you…

6 Comments

  1. Aniruddha Vanage says:

    Wonderful! wonderful!
    It’s like a fairy tale.
    Enjoyed the read, in fact totally got immersed in the poem.
    My hearty compliments. 🙂

  2. Gion Gion says:

    Très romantique!
    Greta closing line.

  3. medhini says:

    A beautiful romantic poem,Sonal.

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