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If I…
English Poetry |
If I speak
it may be heard or not
expelling much impact.
If I part with something
it may be accepted or not
corroding much gratitude.
If I assist in work
one may be relieved or not
wiping away much honour.
If I make genuine
gestures in time
they enable one feel not to forget.
A heart that feels
stirs a lot
making waves afar.
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beautiful poem, indeed
Lovely is the way what is said
elegant & versatile
Commends
Nice poem,
Loved these lines,
“A heart that feels
stirs a lot
making waves afar.”
Good one..! 🙂
@amit478874,
Medhini,
Sure your sincere efforts are creating new waves of poems.
May they reach distant shores of success.
Kusum
Vishvji,Aniruddha,Amit &Kusum;
Thank you for your kind and
encouraging comments
Hi
The feeling heart has many stirrings and many movements and one is surrounded by waves of fluttering . Don’t get caught in ‘ifs’ just feel and do.
sarala
Hearty thanks for profound
comments, Sarala.