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slurrrp..!

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English Poetry

When the regrets of the world
restrain your moves
slurp…
When the self rebukes
over power your presence
slurp…
When the conscience within
collapses your thoughts
slurp…
When the sleepless nights
hinder your days
slurp..
When rotten dreams
stink your whereabouts…
slurp…!

until the righteous sip
bestows the destined best
slurp..slurp..slurp…!

8 Comments

  1. Vishvnand says:

    Liked much the idea of poem & penning
    Good to slurp till with satisfaction one can blurp
    Remembered a TV Ad about a brand of tea
    ” Suurrr ke piyo”

  2. rajdeep bhattacharya says:

    Slurrp
    i loved the way you present your muse
    liked it

  3. ULHAS says:

    Good, Nice poem…..Slurrp Slurrp……..

    7/10

  4. Gion Gion says:

    Sonal,
    nice reflective piece. Stuffed full of sibilant esses.
    “until the righteous sip
    bestows the destined best”,
    Fergus

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