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slurrrp..!
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English Poetry |
When the regrets of the world
restrain your moves
slurp…
When the self rebukes
over power your presence
slurp…
When the conscience within
collapses your thoughts
slurp…
When the sleepless nights
hinder your days
slurp..
When rotten dreams
stink your whereabouts…
slurp…!
until the righteous sip
bestows the destined best
slurp..slurp..slurp…!
Liked much the idea of poem & penning
Good to slurp till with satisfaction one can blurp
Remembered a TV Ad about a brand of tea
” Suurrr ke piyo”
@Vishvnand, haha..very true…and thank you so much..to chale fir surrrr k chaye peene..:) 🙂
Slurrp
i loved the way you present your muse
liked it
@rajdeep bhattacharya, thank you so much for appreciating..:)
Good, Nice poem…..Slurrp Slurrp……..
7/10
@ULHAS, thankyou for the ratings..
Sonal,
nice reflective piece. Stuffed full of sibilant esses.
“until the righteous sip
bestows the destined best”,
Fergus
@Gion Gion, thank you so much for the delightful appreciation… 🙂