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..speechlesss

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English Poetry

yes I am speechless
yet again..
everything whirls around..
and there is lot of sound…
it is deafening me..

I am drunk…
yet again
words fall short
and there is so much to write
it is humiliating me…

I am lost
yet again
chewing the dark rotten secrets
and there is too much chaos
it is drowning me

I am hiding
yet again
finding my way home
and there are misleading gates
it is blinding me…!

8 Comments

  1. Aditya ! says:

    it seems the poem has been written straight from the heart. if yes, be strong. god bless you.

  2. Vishvnand says:

    I am reading
    beautiful poem
    of touching feelings
    It’s delighting me

    commends
    Liked very much

  3. Gion Gion says:

    Sonal,
    well constructed and a good use of repetition of form and phraseology. On form I would suggest the use of capital I and It’s(it is) correct from its(possessive pronoun). The balance of the presentation is a great contrast to the descriptions. This is one of your best, I feel.
    Love the imagery and the uncontrolled motion/commotion it evokes for me.
    “everything whirls around..

    words fall short

    chewing the dark rotten secrets
    too much chaos

    i am hiding

    and there are misleading gates!”

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