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English Poetry |
yes I am speechless
yet again..
everything whirls around..
and there is lot of sound…
it is deafening me..
I am drunk…
yet again
words fall short
and there is so much to write
it is humiliating me…
I am lost
yet again
chewing the dark rotten secrets
and there is too much chaos
it is drowning me
I am hiding
yet again
finding my way home
and there are misleading gates
it is blinding me…!
it seems the poem has been written straight from the heart. if yes, be strong. god bless you.
@Aditya !, thank you Aditya… 🙂
I am reading
beautiful poem
of touching feelings
It’s delighting me
commends
Liked very much
@Vishvnand, thank you so much for appreciating my lines ..it feels really good..:)
@sonal goswami,
Sonal,
Inner journey of self-study very well expressed.
Sometimes silence helps more than words to seek what one desires.
Kusum
@Kusum Gokarn, thank you so much mam..:)
Sonal,
well constructed and a good use of repetition of form and phraseology. On form I would suggest the use of capital I and It’s(it is) correct from its(possessive pronoun). The balance of the presentation is a great contrast to the descriptions. This is one of your best, I feel.
Love the imagery and the uncontrolled motion/commotion it evokes for me.
“everything whirls around..
words fall short
chewing the dark rotten secrets
too much chaos
i am hiding
and there are misleading gates!”
@Gion Gion, thank you again…for understanding my poems so well..its really great to hear from you..thank you..:)