Dawn to Dusk
The sudden flashback
into the spring
pink flowers and leafy terrain
had most astonishingly set a victorious reign..
The fawn inside
hopped with an unbeatable pride,
the promising future
was a mere sketch
what the present had discreetly nurtured..
and one day the eyes woke up
to realize, the cold and dampness engulfed..
Pores of the skin sniffed
the danger around,
the ghastly tomorrow
slapped the face deepening today’s sorrow,
the soul was surging
within the numb living being,
to fight the battle yet unconquered
creating a void of despair somewhere deep under…
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Sonal,
Moving sentiments, forceful words
All in all, a meticulously written , well constructed poem.
Kusum
@Kusum Gokarn, thank you so much for the delightful comment.. 🙂
Beautiful poem Liked very much
Pondered too along with the poem
but was unable to get to the core of motivation for the poem.
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@Vishvnand, well all in all poem says that anything can happen the next moment turning the life up side down…and then we are left with nothing to remorse on…
@sonal goswami,
Thanks for the response conveying the explanation
The beautiful poem “Dawn to dusk” does appear to be an emotional outburst & rationalization of some deep hurt within.
@Vishvnand, thank you once again.. 🙂
nice!!
@Aditya !, thank you..:)
Sonal,
“one day the eyes woke up
to realize, the cold and dampness engulfed..
Pores of the skin sniffed
the danger around,” – great imagery.
Fergus
@Gion Gion, thank you so much.. 🙂 🙂