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My father sniffed the winds
cocked his head
and said
I can feel the rains
sneaking eastward
then doubling back
north westerly
past the Western Ghats
to spout as if
from an elephant’s trunk
at midnight.
Then with a beatific smile
at the certainty
of his forecast, turned
tripped on his dhothi
clutched and clawed
at the door frame
steadied himself
and settled down for
the 6 o’clock Asianet news.
The sky
a clear blue challenge
would call his bluff
I thought.
Half way through
the midnight movie
in the shadow of the night
the sky snarled black
and taut rain strings rolled out
bales of water.
Parting the curtains
loaded with a childhood
midnight fright
watched the breakdance
of thunder
through the rain curtains.
…………………………………………….
neerada
Nice, elegant, different and beautiful.
Delighting reading.
thanks विश्वनंद
neerada
Neerada,
lovely story, well told.
“through the rain curtains.” – may I suggest (through the sheets of rain) to avoid the repetition of the word “curtains”?
Fergus