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Here Are My Eyes…..

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Here are my eyes
Drown them in yours…

Here are my lips
Eclipse them with yours…

Here is my skin
Dissolve it in yours…

Here is my heart
Unite it with yours…

Here are my dreams
Suffuse them with yours…

Here are my hopes
Fulfill them with yours…

Here are my thoughts
Energize them with yours…

Here is my soul
Possess it with yours…

Here is my spirit
Elevate it with yours….

Here is my life
Fill it with yours….

Heres me,
Yours,Yours,Yours !

14 Comments

  1. Aarthika R says:

    Very well penned romantic poem yaar..Congrats !

  2. rajendra sharma "vivek" says:

    Very beutifull and sentimental poem

  3. U.M.Sahai says:

    Beautiful romantic poem, congrats Renu ji. Only thing is that in these lines:
    Here are my thoughts
    Enervate them with yours
    Word “Enervate” doesn’t seem to be appropriate because it means “to deprive of energy or to weaken or to exhaust” etc.

  4. s n singh says:

    anubhuti kee saandrata evam saghanta ka utkrisht abhivyanjan.

  5. Vishvnand says:

    Fantastic & intense
    Enlightenment of what is total melting & merging into other without any trace left of one

    Kudos

  6. medhini says:

    ‘Heres me,
    Yours,Yours,Yours !’

    Everything in me
    unites with that
    of yours. Nice
    thoughts, Renu.

  7. Hi
    Like the tone of merger and total surrender .
    ‘ here’s all of me
    Just yours ,yours yours ‘.
    sarala.

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