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Here Are My Eyes…..
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Here are my eyes
Drown them in yours…
Here are my lips
Eclipse them with yours…
Here is my skin
Dissolve it in yours…
Here is my heart
Unite it with yours…
Here are my dreams
Suffuse them with yours…
Here are my hopes
Fulfill them with yours…
Here are my thoughts
Energize them with yours…
Here is my soul
Possess it with yours…
Here is my spirit
Elevate it with yours….
Here is my life
Fill it with yours….
Heres me,
Yours,Yours,Yours !
Very well penned romantic poem yaar..Congrats !
@Aarthika R, Thanks Aarthika !
Very beutifull and sentimental poem
@rajendra sharma “vivek”, Thanks Rajendra ji
Beautiful romantic poem, congrats Renu ji. Only thing is that in these lines:
Here are my thoughts
Enervate them with yours
Word “Enervate” doesn’t seem to be appropriate because it means “to deprive of energy or to weaken or to exhaust” etc.
@U.M.Sahai, Sahai ji – Thanks for pointing this out….you are indeed correct and have dispelled my wrong notion:) Changing it to “energise”
anubhuti kee saandrata evam saghanta ka utkrisht abhivyanjan.
@s n singh, Shukriya Singh jee
Fantastic & intense
Enlightenment of what is total melting & merging into other without any trace left of one
Kudos
@Vishvnand, Thanks VV ji
‘Heres me,
Yours,Yours,Yours !’
Everything in me
unites with that
of yours. Nice
thoughts, Renu.
@medhini, Thanks Medhini !
Hi
Like the tone of merger and total surrender .
‘ here’s all of me
Just yours ,yours yours ‘.
sarala.
@SARALA KURUP JAGAN, Thanks Sarla !