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That mock at me

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English Poetry

Good words inspire me
Gentle glances promote me
Graceful touch consoles me
Sweet music instills in me
splendid thoughts that cling to me
Sweat seeps through me
the virtue of hard labour that startle me
Curly hair reminds me
classic dance that take me
closer to angels smiling at me
Calculated steps teach me
Can’t count the numerals that mock at me.

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8 Comments

  1. U.M.Sahai says:

    Excellent.

  2. Vishvnand says:

    Very elegant
    “Sweat seeps through me
    the virtue of hard labour that startle me” .. Lines that sparkle
    Hearty commends for the poem

  3. Kusum Gokarn says:

    Medhini,
    Well thought of lyrical words . Musical flow adds charm
    Kusum

  4. medhini says:

    Very grateful for your
    great and appreciative
    comments, Sahai,U.M,
    Vishwaji n Kusumji.

  5. parminder says:

    Does that show your fear of numbers? 🙂 Very nice and musical.

  6. medhini says:

    May be Soniji,
    thanks for good words.

  7. Apurva Bharat Gaglani says:

    lovely poem, loved it very much.

  8. medhini says:

    thanks Apurva.Gaglani.

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