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Tree Recycling.
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English Poetry, Uncategorized |
discarded litter
fallen leaves rustling
messages unread
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branches reach skyward
devoid of leaves but still seen
with scaled eyes
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against winter sky
braided delta of branches
mapping confusion
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bare brittle branches
spread against the cold blue sky
x-ray of a heart
©Copyright Fergus Carty 2012
Hi
Like myriad snaps, the pen- pictures of trees shedding leaves in autumn. The bare tree like the X-ray of heart bereft of all hurt and pain after letting go. .
Nicely structured . A nice pictorial effect in these lines
‘against winter sky
braided delta of branches
mapping confusion’.
sarala
Glad to read your poem after a long gap.
Timely autumn thoughts on eco friendly theme.
Kusum
Very beautiful poem indeed
The comments above made me enjoy & delve in the poem fully & I have liked it immensely
Hearty commends
& also hearty welcome; missing your absence very much which please don’t forget…
“braided delta of branches”
Beautiful line depicting the bare branches and a very picturesque depiction of autumn. Also, I like the way you have compared “bare brittle branches” to a heart. Very nice.
hmmmm
Meaningful indeed
and loved the way you depict your muse Fergus
Great