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little innocent heart
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English Poetry |
we tossed it up…
saw it soaring high…
flying ..to our lullaby…
whirling in the wind..
cards where ours
when water spilled
as if i was dreaming…
sky was an empty canvas..
racing was my heart..
your hiccup
my wings were chopped
that once flew. dropped ….
broke apart…
and lay purple on the ground…
and from there
we carried on..
bruised to separation…!
Indeed , from elation to desperation
Innocence is not long lasting
Beautiful poem though hurting
Liked immensely
Commends
Beautiful, though sad
@vishvnand ji thank you so much…and yes it has a tragic end… 🙁
@viju thanks a lot .. 🙂 🙂
Looks like an honest attempt..! Well written but still need a bit of improvement in presentation. rest is best…!! 🙂
@amit thank you for the comments.. 🙂