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Train of thoughts

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Train of thoughts
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Tongue rolls and rolls
swallows spilling words;
Standing beside a flyover bridge
with a train of thoughts
letting the mind roam
recalling events in the eve
Hoped, perhaps in vain
for the rebirth of dear ones ;
for sharing experience and sheer joy
mutually benefitting in a joyous reunion .
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7 Comments

  1. Vishvnand says:

    Innate feelings differently & beautifully penned.
    Liked very much.

  2. Gion Gion says:

    As Vishvnand observes “intimate”
    Universally so and how apt that the imagery of the ubiquitous train should be used.
    The moment our heart leaps and in that very moment we realize the absence of those with whom we we to share the joy.
    Beautiful poem Medhini.
    Fergus

  3. medhini says:

    Vishvji&Gion
    Thanx so much.

  4. Aryan says:

    Train of thoughts to take us to the station of dear ones, beautiful.

  5. kusum says:

    Simple mundane pleasures of worldly life, small gems of picture words presented succintly in verse form.
    Kusum

  6. medhini says:

    Kusum;
    Thank you for your
    good words.

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